Daniella’s 100 Word Challenge – Week Four

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Sit down children, I am going to tell you a tale said the teacher.  Once upon a time, there was a crocodile named Dr Pepper.  He loved soft toys like pillows and he would paint them orange.  But this week, he forgot to do that so he couldn’t sleep that night.  Then he remembered he hadn’t painted his pillow.

2 thoughts on “Daniella’s 100 Word Challenge – Week Four”

  1. A crocodile artist. I didn’t think I’d be reading about that this week. A very interesting idea, well done. And well done for completing the challenge too. Be careful not to get confused with your tenses. Good work! Mr Eitel-Smith, Runcorn, England

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  2. Well done Daniella you managed to get the 5 words given in this week’s 100 word challenge prompt into your writing – a clever idea to name the crocodile ‘Dr Pepper’. I like how you started your writing, your opening sentences hook in your reader. I would have liked to read more and wonder what happened. You still have some words left over – remember you have 100 in total.

    I hope you continue to take part in the 100WC, I would certainly like to read more of your writing.

    Mrs Williams (Team 100WC)
    http://merrydale.primaryblogger.co.uk/category/100-word-challenge/

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