Alfie’s 100 Word Challenge – Week Two

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But it is yellow… exclaimed William – the sun is yellow Callum.  Ok do you want to go home ok.  Calum ran home with a dash he was gone.  Shortly after that he was long gone then he saw a river.  He stared at it and shortly it turned yellow then orang then every colour of the rainbow.  Whoa what’s going on “Is this your idea of a joke because it’s not funey!” raged William.  Help I need to see a cicolgest.  Soon after that he was off to the doctors.  He was realy scared.  Then on the way, he fell into a dark hole.

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  1. Alfie, You have used good imagination in this post. I like how you have used different colors to show how confused the character is. Make sure you read through your work for proper use of punctuation.

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